Audience feedback

In order to improve the overall success of our trailer, we showed our storyboard to roughly twenty people from our target audience at various different places. Firstly we asked year 12's and 13's in the mac rooms what they thought of our storyboard as we felt that not only they are the correct target audience for our movie but they also have an interest in the media as they study the subject. We also went to Cineworld cinemas in Enfield, after a showing of the new horror film "Let me in", so we knew that we would be dealing with fans of the horror genre. We had a variety of results. The majority of people agreed that it would be a good plot line and something that they would be interested in watching it, however some felt that it was somewhat difficult to follow. Some of the people we asked had some comments to make about the location of our filming, however they felt that it would be more effective to have our protagonist locking herself in the bathroom rather than crying in the kitchen, as this would heighten the sense of chaos and entrapment.